Wednesday, September 14, 2011

The Waterfall

I can see big golden cliffs and long green grass.There are big trees in the back ground .I can see the reflection of the waterfall and I feel like jumping into the water.Before I can jump in I have to check the water for rocks or crocodiles.


  1. Hello Efilona!

    Looks like your waterfall is a beautiful place! What does it sound like? Is the water crashing down or is it just a trickle? When you write about a place you could think about what it looks, sounds or even tastes like. Good work!

  2. Hello Efilona,

    My name is Adrienne Babb and I am a student in Dr. Strange's EDM310 class at the University of South Alabama. Your waterfall sounds like a beautiful place that I would love to visit. Is this an actual place that you have visited? If so, you are very lucky but also very brave for even thinking about jumping into the water. Very nice description! I will provide my blog address if you would like to visit my blog.
    Adrienne's Blog


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